Silver Cord

rotator handle
light your candle
off sparkly
of white heat
it’s gold—
don’t cut
that silver

3 thoughts on “Silver Cord

  1. very cool riff like lyricism to this. Great use of subtle rhyming through pacing. Great word choices as well, love the white heat immediately followed by gold, then silver. Very nicely done. Thanks

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