The waitress told me
I was the only one who
smiled today — how sad


2 thoughts on “Waitress

  1. I love that this is an everyday moment so perfectly captured.
    you know, I might play with spacing on this. make it a little more active visually…
    the “how sad” is a great punch at the end…

  2. I am known as the smiling idiot…strangers look at me like I have two heads these days because the act has become so rare. You know yours turned her day around. There is a book tied up in this potent little weave!

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