Caught a glimpse of grandeur
through her glass showcase;
but her shimmer was not shatterproof
and she’s still picking up shards.
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Caught a glimpse of grandeur
through her glass showcase;
but her shimmer was not shatterproof
and she’s still picking up shards.
FM Ghost 
I love this. It made a really rainy day bright today…
I feel like the last line has one word too many.
OR
I might do this…
“but shimmer is not shatterproof
and she’s still picking up shards.”
its amazing how the dropping of a pronoun changes everything…
I love all this stuff you are doing here. rapid fire, sharp, real, fun…