Shimmer

Caught a glimpse of grandeur
through her glass showcase;
but her shimmer was not shatterproof
and she’s still picking up shards.

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One thought on “Shimmer

  1. I love this. It made a really rainy day bright today…
    I feel like the last line has one word too many.
    OR
    I might do this…
    “but shimmer is not shatterproof
    and she’s still picking up shards.”
    its amazing how the dropping of a pronoun changes everything…
    I love all this stuff you are doing here. rapid fire, sharp, real, fun…

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