It enters my mind
deposits in my spine
bony crooked line
learning to unwind
don’t break your back
lifting everybody’s weight
all else aside, do you have a spine?
A slap in the face
Dust is growing thick on things
Happiness is truth.
It enters my mind
deposits in my spine
bony crooked line
learning to unwind
don’t break your back
lifting everybody’s weight
all else aside, do you have a spine?
A slap in the face
Dust is growing thick on things
Happiness is truth.
I would play with this one…juggle the lines around a bit.
I think there is a different combination…the last three lines seem out of place separated like that.
this is good writing…