Spine

It enters my mind
deposits in my spine
bony crooked line
learning to unwind
don’t break your back
lifting everybody’s weight
all else aside, do you have a spine?

A slap in the face
Dust is growing thick on things
Happiness is truth. 

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One thought on “Spine

  1. I would play with this one…juggle the lines around a bit.
    I think there is a different combination…the last three lines seem out of place separated like that.
    this is good writing…

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