It enters my mind
deposits in my spine
bony crooked line
learning to unwind
don’t break your back
lifting everybody’s weight
all else aside, do you have a spine?
A slap in the face
Dust is growing thick on things
Happiness is truth.
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I would play with this one…juggle the lines around a bit.
I think there is a different combination…the last three lines seem out of place separated like that.
this is good writing…